In my bubble
In my bubble today i had [babakau] babakau is a fijian pancake
And my dad cooked it and then after that I went outside
To play on the tramp i played on the tramp for a long time and then i saw my dad.
Bring out a BIG blue mat it was a water slide my dad and my mum made the
Water slide and then me and ashton realized that that was a water slid and
Then we played on it and then i got cold but ashton did not but then he did
So we went inside.
Water slide and then me and Ashton realized that that was water slid and
Then we played on it and then I got cold but Ashton did not but then he did
So we went inside.
How cool Caleb love your writing well done !!
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DeleteHi Caleb! That looks like a delicious treat for Taste Something Tuesday! Perfect weather for a water slide! Who was faster travelling on the water slide? (And Mum... his writing is improving heaps!)
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